WALT - Engage our readers by using precise language in our writing
"I was travelling in the 'Radio-Flyer and I was chatting to my granddad about aliens. Without warning the swing set, not far from where we were sitting, disintegrated into thin air, we were in space. Suddenly three huge scary UFOs appeared out of nowhere. The aliens looked like they wanted to take us to their leader or something. We dashed away like lightning trying to evade them as they chased us through space. In the distance there was a huge ship, it looked like the mother of all UFO ships. The ship fired up its massive laser guns and aimed at us, we thought for sure we were going to die.
But it was just my imagination and it was just my dad coming up the the driveway.
This week we have been learning to use precise language to engage our readers.